Heres my first pass.
I already got some notes- it needs big, funny reaction to the light turning off, some movement in the lower body, etc. Let me know what else you guys think!
Also, FYI, Annabel mentioned I should really push the pose where he leans into the light. The reason I didnt was because of the clothes pinching. She said we should care about the acting first and not worry about the clothes.
hand transition when he goes to grab the light chain, should be more organic, not a paddle.
ReplyDeleteAlso think about doing a different way of pulling the chain with his hands. something more dynamic than a fist.
Overall good timing, try to vary speeds a bit more if you can. :) good first week!