Wednesday, September 18, 2013

Edison first pass

Hey guys,
Heres my first pass.

I already got some notes- it needs big, funny reaction to the light turning off, some movement in the lower body, etc. Let me know what else you guys think!

Also, FYI, Annabel mentioned I should really push the pose where he leans into the light. The reason I didnt was because of the clothes pinching. She said we should care about the acting first and not worry about the clothes.

1 comment:

  1. hand transition when he goes to grab the light chain, should be more organic, not a paddle.
    Also think about doing a different way of pulling the chain with his hands. something more dynamic than a fist.

    Overall good timing, try to vary speeds a bit more if you can. :) good first week!