Wednesday, October 2, 2013

Edison

Here's a recent playblast. I still havent gone through the part where he turns and clicks on the light and I still need to address his face for the last part of the scene (it doesnt change). Let me know what you think! Love the honest critiques.


2 comments:

  1. The screen right hand ends on a really weird pose. I would fix that straight off.

    Timing still seems a bit even. I'd like more time overall with the reading in the beginning, and make his moving to turn back on the light more punchier, right now it seems too slow for him to just be flicking on a light. Plus if he does it faster it might communicate more attitude. :)

    Hope that helped. Looking good though, seeing some nice progress! Keep it up!

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  2. Thanks! I just had Annabel check it out too- her notes were to make the light click more attitude/angry and to make him get annoying quicker when the light turns out. Thanks for the notes Pattie!

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