Tuesday, October 8, 2013

Scene 5 - Current Polishing (10/8/13)

This is my shot so far.

This is on polishing phase.

Any new critiques? Let me know.

This is a copy and better quality of this playblast on the server.


  1. Nice! my only critique is that when he shakes the book in frustration and then slams it on his lap it kind of look like the book is possessed and moving his arms for him. Not sure if thats because his hands dont move at all or what...

  2. love the moving of the chair. Really sells it. I agree with Kendrra in regards to the antic up with the book before bringing it down. looks like hand seizures....

    Overall its looking much better, and the changes in direction you did with him ducking look very natural and believable. Very good!